I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
You have an interesting design. You may need to think about the parts of your boat, as at the moment you are missing a keel which is a key part of your boat for stability and to help prevent sinking. Can you also think of an alternative material that you could use for the sail?
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You have an interesting design. You may need to think about the parts of your boat, as at the moment you are missing a keel which is a key part of your boat for stability and to help prevent sinking. Can you also think of an alternative material that you could use for the sail?
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